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Learning English
I'm Italian.... homework for university. Guidebook text
Palermo: Beach and Sun Palermo is the best city of Sicily, because is the hottest. Every season is full of sun: winter is the most rainy, but since four years it has become hotter and hotter; spring, summer and the opening days of autumn are the seasons of the sea. In this period the city is full of tourist. The most visited sites are: Palermo's Cathedral, Zisa's Castle, Palace of Normans, Beaches of Mondello, Sferracavallo and Trappeto, and many museaums, monuments arabians, normans etc. In conclusion, why visit the beautiful city of Palermo? Because is the cradle of many cultures: arabian, norman, spanish. Moreover is the land of the greatest kings of history: Ruggero II, Guglielmo II, Federico II. Palermo is a city to discover day by day.
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