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Video games and TV in children's behaviour

Author:vikentiy
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Corrector's skills: Native, Perfect
Tags: tv Movies video games
Language: English
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What is the favorite toy of most modern children? Of course, it is playing in computer games, watching movies and TV programms. I think that our grandparents couldn't imagine that it would be interesting to play games looking in screen with pictures, but not playing football and basketball, skating and skiing, walking with friends and so on. I am sure that children have changed as a result of new era in spending time. So I am sure that such things as playing video games, watch TV and other videos influence young people's behaviour.
First, contemporary children has tiny sense of fear. There are o lot of games where children need to kill people with guns and other terrible equipment. Children can ride there first car at the age of five. So they got a great experience from virtual world, and when they come in reality many things are not new for them. So children know how to ride car and so on.
Second, young people can use the games and movies as a great resource of information. This argument is rather like the first. When children watch TV, they get information from news programms, different shows, films. These sources of information are analogous to that, which were used several decades ago. Today pupils mustn't go to different sections or special circles. They can play chess on there computers, or watch chess lessons sitting near the TV. This leads children to "sitting at home" style of life.
The third argument is the result of the second. Pupils become more lazy with their new toys. They usually use their sources of information in purpose to get pleausure, but not for getting information and studiyng. Children like cartoons, girls like TV-shows with pop-stars, boys like video games. So modern children spend their time sitting at home and wasting their time. They don't want to go for a walk or to play hoccey, because it is easier to watch hoccey matches or playing hoccey on labtop. This is the worst result of using TV and games by young people.
In conclusion I want to say, that TV, movies and video games really change young people's behaviour, but children and their parents can choose between bad sides and good sides of these technologies.












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