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Author:Akumo
Copyright:Prohibited republication
Corrector's skills: Native, Perfect
Tags: love English letter feelings important
Language: English
Progress: processing: 0, ready corrections: 1, remains corrections: 2

Dear Mizuki,

First, I want you to understand that "leave" don't mean "break".
Leave isn't obviously forever...
"When a house will fall down, it's better to destroy this house and built it again. It's better than let the house fall down in front of us without do anything."
I had think so. I had think "if we leave, we will be able to start again a new relationship later, but without pain, we need to calm down."
But in fact... I miss you so much... I think about you everyday... I want to speak... But you don't answer.

I don't abandon you. I will not abandon you. Because I love you.
Never someone make me interested like you do. You make me intriguing, more than everyone, I want to know you more.
You have something special other girls don't have, this special thing who can make me happy without anything... I miss you so much.

Sometimes, when a boy and a girl love each other, they need time, they need calm.
Love is good, but too much love hurt...
If love feeling is too strong, we become more jealous, more angry, more idiot. And I said it again WE.
I think that we love each other too much, we need time, we need to leave some weeks, or some month for calm down.

Trials make the mind grow, you can not become an adult without trials, trials are part of life.

My dream is to meet you, see you, speak with you, hear you, touch you, hug you, and show you how much I love you.
I want to become beautiful for you like me, strong for protect you, intelligent for learn things to you, and become a more kind boy for make you happy.
But now, I'm not like that.
I need to do my best for you.

Write a letter isn't the same than write a message.
We have more time for think about a letter, we have more time for read it many times and understand well the subject, also more time for calm down when we feel bad.
I think that we can write letter to each other without pain...
...But, even if you don't answer to this letter, I will continue to write to you, because I think about you everyday, I need to write for you.
You can love another man if you want, you can hate me if you want, but I will love you, all the time before meet you, other girls are not interesting than you... I want to make you happy.
Because you're special for me.
Maybe when I write this letter, my love feeling is stronger than it has ever been.

Recently, I remembered something that I said a lot of time ago... "Love is accept. Accept differences, accept mistakes, accept everything."
I forgot it. But now, I will keep it in my mind.

I wait your letter.
(Please, write in English. LOL)

Thomas.



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