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Mum, yesterday you were still alive

Author:Khmelenok
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Tags: Mum yesterday you were still alive
Language: English
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Mum, yesterday you were still alive...
You came early in the morning on the balcony...
But the crazy bullet of a sniper
Has led you to a distant (remote) house...
Dad says that there are with you
Angels and clouds around...
Mum, everything I need for the quiet —
That in your hand is my hand...

Mum, you did not let me go for a walk,
Said: «My son, we have a war».
Masha’s father was shot dead
By our clumsy country...
I said Mashka, «Do not cry, my friend,
The men in the uniform will soon go away...
They hide tanks, machine guns, cannons
And will see that here are children...»

And yesterday you were killed, Mum...
Tomorrow is my birthday.
I’m going to be six... That might not be enough
To spend a single day without you...
You promised me
That we go for my holiday
to our relatives to Moscow...
Let’s invite at least our neighbors now...
Mom, where are you? I’m calling you...

Mommy, mommy... I cried that night...
I heard explosions again, saw the smoke...
I love you, I miss you very much.
Mum, how is their life now,
Those who serve in our army,
Who fired on us and ruined our faith in the life??
Mum, I do not need their apologies,
May they give you back soon...

Mum, yesterday you were still alive...
You came early in the morning on the balcony...
But the crazy bullet of a sniper
Has led you to a distant (remote) house...
Dad says that there are with you
Angels and clouds around...
Mum, everything I need for the quiet —
That in your hand is my hand...


Please check my new version:

Mum, yesterday you were still alive...
You came early in the morning onto the balcony...
But a crazy bullet of a sniper
Led you to a distant house...
Dad says that there are angels and clouds
around you there...
Mum, everything I need for the quiet is
Your hand in mine...

Mum, you did not let me go for a walk,
You said: «My son, there is the war».
Masha’s father was shot
By our clumsy country...
I said to Mashka, «Do not cry, my friend,
The men in the uniform will soon go away...
They’ll hide tanks, guns, cannons
And will see that there are children here...»

And yesterday you were killed, Mum...
Tomorrow it is my birthday.
I’m going to be six... That might be very little
To spend no day with you...
You promised me
That we would go for my holiday
to our relatives to Moscow...
Let’s invite at least our neighbours now...
Mum, where are you? I’m calling you...

Mummy, mummy... I cried that night...
I heard explosions again, I saw the smoke...
I love you, I miss you very much.
Mum, how is their life now,
Those who serve in our army,
Who fired on us and ruined our faith in the life??
Mum, I do not need their apologies,
I want them return you as soon as possible...

Mum, yesterday you were still alive...
You came early in the morning onto the balcony...
But a crazy bullet of a sniper
Led you to a distant house...
Dad says that there are angels and clouds
around you there...
Mum, everything I need for the quiet is
Your hand in mine...

Khmelenok 2018-01-11 09:46:20

Мама, ты вчера была живая…
Вышла рано утром на балкон…
Только пуля снайпера шальная
Увела тебя в далёкий дом…
Папа говорит, что там с тобою
Ангелы вокруг и облака…
Мама, всё что нужно для покоя –
Чтоб в твоей руке моя рука…

Мама, ты гулять не отпускала,
Говорила: «Сын, у нас война»
Машиного папку расстреляла
Наша неуклюжая страна…
Машке говорил: «Не плачь, подружка,
Дяди в форме скоро все уйдут…
Спрячут танки, автоматы, пушки
И увидят, что детишки тут…»

Мама, а вчера тебя не стало…
Завтра День Рожденья у меня.
Будет шесть… наверно, это мало,
Чтоб с тобой не провести ни дня…
Ты же обещала, что поедем
Мы к родным на праздник мой, в Москву…
Ну, давай хоть пригласим соседей…
Мама, где ты? Я тебя зову…

Мама, мам… Я плакал этой ночью…
Снова слышал взрывы, видел дым…
Я тебя люблю, скучаю очень.
Мама, как теперь живётся им???
Тем, кто в нашей армии на службе,
В нас стреляли, веру в жизнь губя???
Мам, мне извинений их не нужно,
Просто пусть скорей вернут тебя…

Khmelenok 2018-01-11 09:46:48


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