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Learning English
False Happiness
| Author: | martin16 |
| Copyright: | Can use |
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song
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Something true came into my life Make it full with happiness and light Then all my days were like a bless I couldn't know it would be just one big mess
And it was end When you runned away And it was end You haved nothing to say I thought i would made it through But in the end all i want was you
Now I know it all was a lie Denying thruth pretending to smile There never was anything But now is too late to see Something is angry becouse of you And that thing is me
And it was end When you runned away And it was end You haved nothing to say I thought i would made it through But in the end all i want was you x2
Now it's clear I must go Leave this place And let you know I'm not like you I have my pride All this thoughts in my head will dissappear By the end of the night By the end of the night The night The...night
There is nothing to correct. Very good English
felix
2009-09-27 20:03:26
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